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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Son is Gay

    It was amazing! Really awesome that you pulled it off just with dialogue. I love it! I don't write anymore and I just come to yws once or twice a ...

    Dec 10, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: the last words

    *Looking at my review* Woah!! That's big!! But not much of actual reviewing though... plz don't hate me for not giving you an actual review with serious criticism and everything... ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: the last words

    What you wrote is something I can relate to. If I'm going to die, I'm entitled to say a few words. Am I right? I don't feel free, I don't ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: The F.U.N. Song.

    F= Finally finishing something!! and not giving up U= U liked it!! I AM SOOOOOOOOOOO HAPPPYYYYY!!!!!! N= Now, I guess I'll move on to reading and writing other stuffs :p ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: I Can't Believe It

    Normally, The guy should do this, that's why. But, 86% of guys expect the girl to make the first move. It was sweet story and also a bit funny. He ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Silent Screaming

    The clicking of the clock ceases to start, As all time is frozen like solid water, The wind is still between each bare blowing, All that is moving, a silent ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: terrorist?

    I am never going to get why most ppl think that all muslims are terrorist. Just 'cause some shitheads 'caused 9/11 they think that everyone of them are terrorists!!! Why? ...

    Jun 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Mirror, mirror on my wall

    When I was writing this, I was writing this as a song. So I guess these are lyrics. And I just put together random words, I don't know what this ...

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Thoughts of a Call-Girl

    I don't have much to critique, all I just can say is: I loved it

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Origami animals, flowers and dinosaurs

    Wow, your good at this! And I specially liked the first one, the Archeopteryx. (Killer-falcon-dino bad ass)

    Jun 12, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Love gun

    Wow, your good at this! I really loved how you sketched it. It's fine work, really. Although I am no specialist in this area, but as a genuine person who ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Pengu frenzy

    "Why! Why won't they come!!?" He says to himself, "What is wrong with those young fairies, why won't they come to school!!?" The principal of 'Fairyland high' talks to himself ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: A dreame

    'where people are together no blacks no whites no defined rights every one together' ... You are a typo freak, and I am the hated semi-perfectionist editor who sometimes types ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: lost change of love

    Dude, you seriously need to add more details. And I mean add "Conversations" not details to the rape part. People will rate your story 18+ and hate you for life!! ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Other Re: There's a Decepticon on My Wall

    Really funny. Poor you! You have to sleep at night knowing that a decepticon is in your house planning to destroy the world :( :p I wish that it was ...

    Jun 2, 2011


I'm also not sure why but even though I normally wear cool tones I have a feeling red would have been my color in the 1860s.
— Elinor