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Re: Magius Trilogy Book I Chapter I
The last remnants of fleecy white clouds were dyed blood red as the sun sank into the valley. Kirthin sighed. These few last hours of the day were his favourite ...
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Re: Russian Roulette
Excellent. Very good work, but try to avoid passive voice.
Feb 28, 2009 -
Re: Hi I'm new
Hey everybody. I;m new and I'm here to write and become better at writing. Plz review my work with compliments and/or constructive critisism!! Thnx!!! :D
Feb 28, 2009