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Mind checking out this poem? Please do tear it apart! I want to see if it's got potential. Thanks in advance.

Mind checking this poem out? Please do tear it apart, I just wonder if it's got potential. Thanks in advance.

revising, will be up again soon...

I enjoyed Inception a great deal, but when I think about it in-depth, it is lacking in a few respects. Overall, the dreams crafted were a bit too... mundane. I ...

Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this for me? Thanks in advance!

Hey there again! Could you review this for me? You were very helpful the last time. :D

Well, I feel sheepish for doing this, but... Would you mind checking this out? It could use your terrific insight. I won't take this one down before you get a ...

Could you review this for me? Thanks!

Hey, Suz! Mind reviewing a short story for me? Thanks in advance! I've been experimenting more, definitely trimming down the floweriness of my writing, reducing the figurative language to a ...

Would you mind reviewing this short story for me? Thanks in advance!

Hi there! This is interesting, I'll admit. I must tell you though for future reference, avoid centering lines of verse at all costs. It's most often the mark of an ...

Wow. Very, very nice work here. The title caught my eye and I'm so glad I decided to check this out. There's so many choice lines here that it's too ...

Hi, Scarlett! Overall this poem is not bad, you use some interesting words. I think there needs to be some more punctuation in here but it's not a gigantic problem ...

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Could you review this short story for me? Thanks!