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Frivolous princess, blasé queen— in the Hall of Mirrors she pauses, unsure which reflection is herself: rose-bitten lips, crown gnawing her scalp, diamonds clawing at her throat. Her satin-slippere

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Wet wings fluttering, our bodies shuddering as his hot-iron halo saws into my skin. Fingers elongate to claws and blood wheels in veins— the immortal martyr wrestles, dragging me to ...

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Hi there. The title of this piece caught my attention so I checked it out, and I'm glad I did. Degradation of the soul brings a strange macabre cold, which ...

I love the cacophony conjured by the word choice in the second line, as well as the personification of static as being like crickets and cicadas, but overall this piece ...

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Hi there, me again! :smt003 Mind checking out another poem? Your last review was so helpful that I can't resist asking. Preferably, tear it apart! Thanks a million.

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Ceramic bones puncture plastic skin, acrylic eyes roll in their sockets. Denim clings low, limbs dangle before white screen: a lady caged in a body. Two-page ads blare the name— ...

Hey, Rachael! Thought I should return the favor and critique this. You're an experienced writer so I won't dwell on nitpicks. There's no SPaG errors that I can find and, ...

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Mind checking this poem out? Feel free to tear it apart, I'm trying to see if it's got potential. Thanks in advance!