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Would you mind reviewing this for me? Thank you in advance!

The best book I have ever read is Beloved by Toni Morrison. Even today, years later, the praise for that novel is gigantic, but it even exceeds those high expectations. ...

Would you mind reviewing this? Thanks a whole lot in advance.

Hi, fadedphotograph! If you could see the side of me that was once alive and free You would fall a victim to my ensnaring wrath of romance. Radiant and wayward ...

The air wet with blood, The sound of organs stirring. Raw red curtains rapidly unfurling. A sight veiled in water, A coruscating disk. Sterile walls slanting into stark square. Through ...

Hi there! Mizzle said most of what I can say, but I'd like to help you with this piece, too. The repetition of "The one" bothered me very much as ...

Hi there! :smt003 Wings of faith lay broken on a shadowed floor. They weep with the pain of betrayal, sharp, quick and sudden . "Wings of faith".... Hmmm, it's difficult ...

Greetings, erinlyric! Retro already pointed most of the major issues with this piece, but I found a few problems grammar problems. I'll get right down to it. When the sun ...

Hi there, Sassykat! Most of the nitpicks have already been pointed out, so I won't reiterate them, I'll just give you some general advice. Overall, this poem is afflicted with ...

Hi, Warrior Princess! I'll get right down to it. Look into the eyes of innocence, Staring down the barrel of the gun. The stark contrast between the image of innocence ...

Hi, lily! :smt003 I enjoyed reading this, but I will point out what irked me... he seemed perfect from a distance - much like the memory of a moment only ...

First of all the title is very good as it immediately catches my attention, though I do think that the way the title is phrased in the poem, "concrete wings," ...

Could I beg you for a review once more? I think this is one less...god-awful than the other two, heheh. In hindsight (and especially as clarified by your thoughts) those ...

Could you review this for me? Muchas gracias. :smt003

Kiss my bee-stung lips, Drive the splinters into my skin, Thrust until I can’t breathe. Lift your neck upward - higher, higher, Until the sun melts the blue plastic of ...