bkwrm

Hey this is a great! A visiting author once told pupils at my school that writing down your dreams helps when you're stuck for inspiration. I must admit I was ...

Nice! * Whistles appreciatively * It's such a fantastic way to start. Anyway there's just one thing i noticed: That’s a sad note to die on, I think, but then ...

I totally agree. Burp sounds wrong, but I don't have any suggestions as to what you could put in its place.

Impressive! I think it's really good. Actually most of your stuff is really good. I wish I could come up with the goods as often as you seem to. Anyway ...

You're doing well so far. I love the front cover and I haven't had time to properly read the begginning yet, but I have scanned and it looks pretty good! ...

I really like it when people express their opinions, no matter how often a similar opinion has been voiced. I definately love the rhythm and I can just hear heavy ...

Not really sure what to call this. Any suggestions? Bkwrm Can you hear the whisper of the night upon the trees? Can you hear the longing stirring in the breeze? ...

>I wrote this for music, when we were looking at pop songs. Tell me what you think. Personally I was quite proud of it! (But obviously it's not perfect so ...

Love it, love it love it! Only one thing - Untainted, uncorrupt should it be uncorrupt ed ? Just a suggestion. Anyway keep it up, you're doing good. Bkwrm

Hi! I like this and I think you're doing really well. I agree with paintedcookie that you need to check your work over though, as some of it is a ...

I love the way you've done this. It really works. I'm off to sign your guest book now, Bkwrm.

Thanks for your comments. Maybe I'll get around to checking punctuation sometime soon! Bkwrm

Chapter Eight Phoebe looked up at Charlie’s house nervously. Between them, she and Charlie had decided that as they had heard Sasha and her friends were going to the cinema ...

I like it! You've really summed up bonfire night - well done! I really like the use of the word exhilerating. Keep it up, bkwrm :D

Other countries have got it right when they use different words for the different kinds of love. Love can be so different every time you experience it