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Chapter Three-World War Four Continues and something takes Haley’s fancy. Haley woke the next morning to an irritating sight: light. It poured in through the gap in her blinds and ...

oo i really like this. very nice. short, sweet, to the point and well structured. well done the only bit i was a little unsure of was... 'to grow to ...

this was really beautifully written. :) the point you made is so clear and well thought out. it was such a touching piece of writing. sweet, lovely and delicate, not ...

to be honest, i wasnt trying to write a successful poem. like i mentioned, i wrote this when i was bored. as with all my other poems. in fact, i ...

ok a lot of the technical stuff has been taken care of! so i will review from a readers point of view looking at this for the first time i ...

this is a nice little piece, i like your idea however there a few things i want to point out... 1) possible typing errors in beginning. 2) also in fourth ...

thanks for all the comments people, im very grateful

i think the length is perfect. :) the poems rhyme is very good , the point is well brought across and the rhythm is good. :) i just think that ...

fistly, very well done i love the bit about high school. it is so true that people split up into various different groups.! (i can think of a few examples!) ...

coool. short, sweet and very meaninful. one thing i would say is that it is a little cliched (i think) but i understand that that cant be helped and tbh, ...

Chapter Three-World War Four Continues and something takes Haley’s fancy. Haley woke the next morning to an irritating sight: light. It poured in through the gap in her blinds and ...

fabbydooda! (excuse that, just a cool word) this is seriousoly amazing, i especially love the eye sorry this was so short, i just love it so much! to be honest, ...

WOw, first review goes to me :) Firstly, hi. I really loved this piece. :) it was great and really straight to the point which i like in a poem. ...

woah. this must have taken a huge amount of time Everything is so detailed and amazing. its so brilliant how you have so much commitment in your work! great job! ...

Wow, this is a very sophisticated drawing, i would never be able to piece together anything that compares! (my art always comes out cartoonish for some reason.) hehe I love ...