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so this is my review :) first off, I'd like to point out that within is one word not two :) the poem is really good, I liked it. it ...

thank you! that was the idea for this. to be very simple and not give to much away. I've been taking some notes from the other reviews I got and ...

yeah it is this short because it was for a competition and there could only be like 33 words or something like that. I also translated it from my mother ...

thanks for reviewing :D

thanks for commenting and for your advice :)