birdiegirl42

ok, that was great. i loved the descriptive words you used to really give the story a strong effect. minor spelling problems but nothing to bad. I'd try to stay ...

I sit here and cry Stuck in the middle of your new lie. My heart shatters Your interest in me scatters I fell in love with you You just wanted ...

Omg that was great. i liked that you described logan's face in so much detail, but could you describe charlie more, so it's easier to see it play out in ...