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Thank you so much. I'm glad you understood the tone, it means I conveyed what I meant to. As for the beginning there actually WAS a part detailing the walk ...

Thank you both for your comments. That word skipping was intentional, not that I specifically wanted to NOT say "that," it's just that the sentence was meant to be as ...

I like how you move from one idea to another so quickly in this poem. It creates a kind of flying above the landscape feeling, if you know what I ...

I like the fact that you portrayed a family pet like a child. But I think the poem needed to reflect the unique-ness (is that even a word?) of the ...

Young love is pretty damn close. It's about a former best friend, but, yeah, it's almost exactly the same emotionas young love. The kind of naive snapshot quality, you know? ...

It all sounds pretty forced, but as far as something used to attempt to end Writers' Block, it's much better than I would have done. Believe me, I have eked ...

Thanks :) I actually wanted to keep it all lowercase because it conveys the feeling of youth. And I'll read it over and take a look at those lines and ...

come. close your eyes and take my hand. our feet whisper through dampened grass, i promise i’ll keep you near, because i’d never want to lose you. our steps match ...

Twenty years ago I ran. It was my birthday: eighteen, summer. It was ninety-eight degrees and none of us had air conditioning. So we went out to the movies. About ...