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"gold crosses next to skin mags" The contrast of the image sin this line is amazing. "as for other news J.Lo's baby has three heads London bomb kills ten" My ...

Thanks for your review. What parts of it seem cliche to you, nayex?

Thank you, bluewaterlily. When I have a little more time, I'll go over it and try to change it to a uniform tense. It's a problem I have with my ...

As for the un-capitalized words, the strange placement was formatted a little differently in the original Word document. they were italicized and placed at different ares of the page, one ...

I like the kind of Shakespearean sarcasm tone you conveyed with this poem. The only problem I have with it is that the last couple lines seems kind of forced.

Is this even a poem? It just seems like a weird daydreaming narrative you would think to yourself in your head. Like...you know how little kids kind of narrate their ...

I feel like working in such a structured rhyming scheme kind of messed up the feeling of this poem. It seems more like a nursery rhyme, a cautionary tale that ...

"Innocent smiles that seemed to Brighten up his side Seems like a weird line break, perhaps "Innocent smiles that seemed/ To brighten up his side?" "Cheeks like fresh roses, And ...

I love the feeling of this poem and the idea behind it, but there are a few parts where the rhythm seems forced. Other than that, it was good. I ...

This is the best poem by far I have read so far on this entire site. I have absolutely no corrections to suggest.

Lynn stumbled into her dorm and heaved a high-pitched giggle. There were little balls bouncing everywhere, but every time she reached out to grab one, they popped like bubbles. She ...

People don’t like attending funerals for the same reason many people don’t like caviar. It’s an acquired taste. Fear is an acquired taste. In actuality, it’s something one feels more ...

I absolutely love this poem. I love it so much.

OK, I really, REALLY like this, with some minor adjustments it would be incredible. I love the imagery and the personalization of the language and images in it.

I like the unconventional structure, but I think you relied on it a bit too much. Like you meant to spotlight the structure but lost imagination in the actual description ...