bigdreamsforagirl

Hey,I really likes the concept of it but I think you should add more deatils tot he story. Also I think you should show more character emotions but the concept ...

All you said is true. I really like the concept and message of the poem. I think you should change the tittle to "Love is..." or something like that. And ...

Hey,I think its a really good shot but I think this picture could be better. I think you should edit it and make it less blurry or add more color. ...

I really like this poem. I liked the structure of it and the rhyme. Please keep writing,this is really good!

Loved it! You have a gift for drawing.This is beautiful!

I though this was really cute. I just think it should've rhymed more considering you do have some parts that rhyme bu other than that I though it was cute,simple ...

Hahahahha i really liked that you created a little suspense. I loved the end part it was a total surprise. Keep it up! This was really good.

I see a lot of potential in the poem but there was no rhyme or flow with the words. With a little editting and maybe adding more lines i think ...

I really liked this and the rhyme was good. Keep up the good work!

Wow,this is really good. The message is simply beautiful. I like the depth of your words and i can actually feel you pain. Keep up the good work. This is ...

Nice poem. I just think it need a little more editing in some parts but other than that good job! Keep up the good work.

Aww this is really good. I can really feel how much you loved that guy and I'm sure he would've loved this. Good job! Keep it up and stay strong!

I really liked this. I think it just needs a little bit more editing. Other than that it was really good. Nice job!

Hahahaha this was a rather funny poem but i liked it :) goood job!

I likes the poem and the message was just beautiful the only problem is probably the ending. The ending was too short and didn't fit the rest of the poem.But ...