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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Dear daddy,

    Dear daddy, Daddy should be capitalized. No, dad, don’t look so severe. Dad should be capitalized. Sincerely, your little girl Your Little Girl Should have been capitalized. You might disagree ...

    Jun 19, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I Wish -Contest Entry-

    "Rosie frowned. “I can’t sleep mama.” (Sorry, I don't know how to do the quote thing... This is my first review!) Here, Mama should have been capitalized, and after sleep ...

    Jun 19, 2011


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