bexy89

With all the hype about Fifty Shades of Grey (which I don't understand as I've read some of it and it was so boring I almost nodded off but that's ...

Thank you :) and ok, that's fab, I'll update my original post then

I was all for going down the TP route after finishing my first novel "Wherever You Will Go" but after a good old think, I thought, if by some chance ...

I finished my story a couple of days ago, I spent all day yesterday and into the early hours of this morning re-reading, editing etc. I think it's pretty much ...

Thank you again :) don't worry about being nit-picky, it's very much needed if I want to refine everything down to the tiniest detail. I really do need to work ...

Hey, I'll start with the really nit-picky bits: Eating disorders, depression, self infliction, and bipolar disorder. I’ve had it all. At least I assume I have. It was never clinical, ...

Hi there. Just a couple of nit-picky things first of all: Don’t offer me a fag. I don’t have the time to get lung cancer. I don’t even have time ...

Ok, well good luck then. Becki

I'm sorry you feel that way but I wasn't dissecting your work, I was merely pointed out what I and any other reader would find confusing or that did not ...

Hey, I pretty much agree with everything that the above poster has said in regards to wording, spelling/grammar/punctuation errors etc. I came across another sentence that flows awkwardly: I left ...

Hi there, just a couple of points: An immature (immature what?) got hold of paints. There were colours he 'd never saw (seen) and shades he had never seen in ...

Thank you for your comments :) definitely taken them on board and will adjust accordingly! I'm not 100% sure that I'll be keeping the prologue yet, I'm going to try ...

Ah I see lol fair enough

This is the first time I've done it, I was having one of those days where you get really emotionally caught up and I just knew if I wrote my ...

Anyone do this? I wrote up a plot line for my story before I started it. I knew exactly how I wanted it to begin and how I wanted it ...