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Re: Man’s Best Friend.
Man’s Best Friend. Am I ashamed in which this life I’ve grown? It’s hard to say, was there a choice? This life I am alone. Mother, father, Sister, brother, Their ...
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Home
HOME Isabel and Sam could not be more different and the lives that they lead would never normally cross over. They are both, however, searching – searching for that one ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Fallen Peace
I am thinking about entering this poem in a poetry competition. I was just wondering if you had any further advice for me or how I could improve my poem ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: Breaking Through
WOW. This was amazing! From the title I thought it might just be another poem about breaking out - which I guess it could be. But for me this poem ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: A Holocaust Requiem
I am currently studying the holocaust at school. I always knew it was bad... but I never thought it was as horrible as I have discovered it to be. I ...
May 2, 2008 -
Re: A River
alleycat13: thanks so much, I will make that change. I understand what you mean about making it rhyme a bit more but I was trying to go for the free ...
Apr 19, 2008 -
Re: Fallen Peace
W1ldF1r3: thanks so much! I changed the first verse so in the poem it is a branch the whole time, I agree it didn't really link before but hopefully it ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Fallen Peace
All across the news there is the talk of war. All through the papers there is the news of murder and death. All of these things seem to rule our ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: My Little Brother.
I deeply loved this peom and it only gets better each time I read it through. I love the whole concept and the wording and phrasing is beautiful. You'll tear ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Dreamland
This is a short and powerful piece. I also agree with VG (very good suggestions). This poem is very emotional and rings true to what I think some people in ...
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Tree
Trees have always amazed and captivated me. But I have only ever seen them in one stage of their lifetime, whereas in this peom I was able to see the ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: The Dreamer's Reality
I believe that this poem is incredibly true to real life and the world we live in. It was the title that originally caught my attention - but then as ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: A River
A river – slowly, silently – dying Its cries for help can not be heard, for no one listens No one wishes to hold out a helping hand They all ...
Aug 13, 2007