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i love this poem! i think the punctuation is all right, and i like it like that, full of mystique. i agree woth CK Lynn, that you should describe the ...

oh, by the way, i want to name my daughter Amber too! LOL!

Heyya Ashley, I am Berry! Welcome to YWS. Nice introduction. I love your questionaire! May I borrow it? I know you will have loads of fun here! Feel free to ...

i see quite a number of punctuation and spelling errors. Also: The boy flips threw the pages of the old book It should be through , right? Life is a ...

it's fabulous. easy to read and very fluent. very descriptive too. a beautifully written piece.

i love the icons you made! they're so pretty(:

i read Lyla's story from part 1 to 10, and i loved it! i think it was kind of realistic, and i liked your style of writing, but i hope ...

shouldn't ron defend himself from the imperius curse? and i agreed with writingluver and RED about Neville. He was too calm, and i think you should have him cry a ...

hey, i loved this :D although this is not what i usually read in forums and stuff, but well, i loved this. and i can't spot any mistakes... :D i ...

hello, and welcome to YWS! my name is berry(no kidding!) and i live in singapore(: i like cats too. :D i like to listen to music, and i love to ...

i love the Sisterhood of the Travelling Pants :D And to think that that was Ann Brashares' first novel. i read a book of the gossip girl series, and i ...

this isn't a cliche. i think it was written really great as a short story. i loved how you described how the sister's hair smelt like bubblegum, and the how ...

the notes contained instructions from Gerry to Holly, and they really helped her to move on with her life. one of the notes instructed Holly to throw Gerry's items and ...

Did you check and double check your answers to be sure you didn’t make any careless mistakes. I think it should be : Did you check and double check your ...

this really sound like a great book :) she is 15, dates her mother's boyfriend, involves herself in drugs and alcohol, and lives in the 1970s? Wow, i thought the ...