berrylique

wow, this is great. no major mistakes, except you spelt "want" as "wan't". i think the background voice was a great addition to the song. and i think you need ...

the title intrigued me to read this... and i thought it is pretty good. i would like to hear the tune :)

erm, i am not really sure if this is long enough to be a song. but the lyrics was ok, i think.

they are gorgeous! i like all three :D the second one looks almost like digital art. they are very very pretty! :)

this chapter was ok. again, you have made a lot of mistakes. Syddles pointed them out. maybe you would like to tidy and clean this up? anyway, i am waiting ...

although it's a short chapter, it's nice. i spotted a lot of mistakes, which i think Syddles had already pointed them out. good work. :D

i thought this chapter was good. again, there were lots of grammar and punctuation mistakes, and i hope you will clear them up or something. i agree with Griffinkeeper. You ...

nice piece :) very funny and interesting. i love biology :D the experiments are so cool. i extracted DNA too, but from our own human cheek cells. i would love ...

i love this :D very original and funny. at some points i had to laugh out loud. and i couldn't spot any errors. i would love to see more parts ...

pretty ok, except for some spelling mistakes. also, the title was mispelt, giving others a bad impression.

again, the ssame punctuation mistakes. but this chapter was more interesting than the first one. most of your speliing and puntuation errors have been ponted out by Lady Pirate, but ...

somewhere around last month, my class and i went to the Weland Reserve. Here are some photos I took: There is a mudskipper in the waters... A monitor lizard. It ...

you have a nice theme here! just want to point out some of the errors: 1. in the dialouge, you must be careful of your punctuation. remember to end your ...

they are gorgeous(: i agree with the other authors, i loved the first one. i has the "feel", you know. it's a real romantic feeling. sunrises are just the thing.

is simple and nice(: is that blood there? but i don't really feel the "winter" theme. maybe you would like to work on that?