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Re: Trouble, My Favorite (Chapter 3: Remembering) and Chapter 4
Great job! Before i get to the heart of the story, I'll just point out a few mistakes. 1) You say "Now, my two world were colliding". I believe you ...
Jul 22, 2011 -
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This is so passionate, my eyes teared up. You are very lucky to have a girl that you love so much. I hope she knows how much she means to ...
Jul 22, 2011