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becka-g

  • Other Poetry Re: lost between the cracks

    I love the imagery you’ve used here! And the style in which you wrote the verses. All in all, I am impressed. A very well written poem! :D :D :D

    Aug 14, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Folded Page of a Dream

    Folded page of a dream in my pocket Maybe it’s just me but I think you should add an “a” to the beginning of that sentence. Ignore me if you ...

    Aug 14, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: hi

    hi imm becka im new here and i've joined to show people my lyrics to get reviws and hopefuly you'll like it

    Aug 14, 2007


I want to shake off the dust of this one-horse town. I want to explore the world. I want to watch TV in a different time zone. I want to visit strange, exotic malls...I want to live, Marge! Won't you let me live?
— Homer Simpson