beatlesfreak82

This is a really nice poem! I see you've mastered it well. I like the repetition of the phrase "Ghosts of Christmastime." It tells the reader that something must be ...

I really like the setup in this. Guy and girl are in love, they fight each other, something spooky happens... but there doesn't seem to be anything particularly spooky in ...

I really like the whole atmosphere of it, but it needs a little tweaking to become a fully-fledged story. It's also a bit short and needs some cleanup. I like ...

This is a really short story but very good. You obviously know how to capture great horror. I love how the messages are in all caps to signify the fear ...

This is actually intriguing. I like the whole atmosphere of it. This story creates a tense, chilling aura that will get you out of your seatbelts. There is genuine horror ...