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Unfortunately, I can't tell you if your rating is correct, but, when in doubt, go with the higher choice. Which would be this one, I think. You describe a lot ...

Hello! I usually don't critique science fiction, so bear with me. (Hah ha.) So you sci-fi people really seem to know what you're doing. This was good. I liked how ...

I have trouble classifying certain things. Like now, for instance. I have a story that takes place in the future, after humans no longer just live on Earth (and America ...

So, some things were a little superfluous, but I shall get to that later. You know what I really really liked about the landscape that you describe? Well, for one, ...

This is so funny! And true, this will make people hate you. I have one. 45. "Yeah-but..." all of the reviews you get. A reviewer tells you your characters are ...

I would cry, and then pray my Dad isn't too disappointed, and then run to the Guidance office, screaming, "WHAT HAPPENED?" What would you do if America invaded Canada and ...

Interesting. I skipped the poem at the beginning and then read it at the end, for no particular reason other than that it's not needed. Or at least not visibly ...

Wee! I'm the first to critique this. Call me petty, but I like being the first. I'm always afraid someone will have said everything I've said and there will be ...

Your vocabulary is beautiful. Your prose seems to have a rhythm to it. However, while entrancing, I found it confusing. I had to trudge through all of this, particularly in ...

I hope this is lyric poetry. I'm not good at classifying poetry. In fact, poetry and I are really only acquaintances. Whether or not this is a poem is up ...

I really, really liked this. See that there? Two really's. Before I praise your poem further and point out comma mistakes, I'm going to warn you that I do not ...

Romance stories are definitely a guilty pleasure of mine. I enjoyed this entire story a whole lot, until you started winding down to the end. You have a really intense ...

Oh, wow. I have never been critiqued like this before! Thank you. This is going on the back burner so I can work on something else, but I will keep ...

I found few problems with this. However, you are missing some commas. I've been too lazy to do in depth grammar crits, but a quick rule: when addressing someone, their ...

What happens when one only has the first bit to work with - one often jumps to conclusions in critiques. Since this takes place a few years before, this prologue, ...