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"Oh Giselle," the smirk said. Giselle felt the unshakable sensation of being violated, just in that one word. It was deeply upsetting, and gave her the mental image of maggots ...

I pushed hard at playing hockey and playing piano for years and I never excelled at either. There is an element of raw talent, X factor, to everything. Writing included. ...

Oh boy. You asked for it. 1. I can always tell when a story is made up as it goes or is carefully outlined. How? Because if a story has ...

I don't know! Perhaps I should get to know her more.

I've always been a fan of writing things I'd like to read. I've always been an avid reader and writer though, so it's a good outlet for me.

Bumping! The majority of my novel is up online at

Go for it, I'd love your insight

I would like very much if you have this chapter a look-see, though it might benefit you to read the rest of the story because context and stuff. Rated 18 ...

Draw! Draw! Keep drawing! :mrgreen: Don't ever let up, even if a super bad guy kidnaps your family and tells you to stop if they must live!

Please get me out of the green room :(

Would love a review on Chapter 5 of Ascension, it's kind of been rotting in the green room for some time

I would love if you had a peek at my story as a whole... Just sort of a general overview thing. Ignore grammar and stuff, that's what editors are for. ...

I would very much appreciate a review of It needs a little boost out of the Green. There is a bit of a shocking scene, hence the mature tag, but ...

Hey guys, I need a LOT of points to post Ascension, and on top of amassing enough gold to do so, I'd like as many perspectives I can get. So ...