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Stephen King is by far my favorite author out there. but some of his new stuff really hasn't done it for me. i read cell expecting (okay, half-expecting) some sort ...

thank you very much jiggity. i really appreciate your help with all the grammar issues sand things. i'll be sure to make the adjustments. and well the end, you said ...

Thanks guys for your critique :) It's appreciated. Still open for anyone else willing to comment, whatever. And I'm actually 15, Misinterpreted :shock:

this was great, honestly. creeped me out. i think its really great how you can capture human emotion without any description at all. thats a gift and i wish i ...

From the Corner of His Eye is a really good one

hey, thanks for your critique. i guess i should explain a few things. the chapters aren't connected. well they are of course, which you'll find out later, but its not ...

i really like the way you wrote it. the whole "she says" things makes it different. besides some needed polishing i like it!