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Hey. The story has a good idea, but i agree with everyone above me, it is very rushed. I found it hard to grasp everything that was going on because ...

I liked this poem. It did a great job with conveying how much the speaker cares about the other person. My favorite part is the image you give when you ...

8/10. kinda funny. =]

I like this poem. I feel like it's about an itch, but at the same time, that itch might represent something a bit bigger than just an itch. Something more ...

I loved this. Being in band myself, I get the feeling. I loved the personification of each instrument, each extremely specific to it's type, whether it was the jumping valves ...

I’ll reach you by dragonfly The flutter of the wings buzzing by my sides The nip of the wind kissing softly, my face, as we glide through the air, colors ...

Three Marks All alone in a crowded place Thriving off revolt and counterfeit grace Just a mortal that’s clashing with space Outlined with grudge and blood stained lace Three marks ...

haha, so much for not putting my last name...

My middle school band teacher was my favorite teacher ever, and he taught me everything there is to know about music. he has stuck with me now, even after middle ...

Right, I will change that line. I don't know why I had it like that anyways... And I'll change the capitalization. I guess you can use it, can I ask ...

wow... just... wow. i like it a lot. i really like how you used the parenthesis. like, extra thoughts, your thoughts that were in the poem. if this is real, ...

um... hmmm. where do i start? im guessing this guy is a general? in WWI or something like that. then again, with the slave raping it could be the Civil ...

INCENSE you got me incense, and now im burning it. its called "love" and it is so perfect for us right now... 'love' set aflame. and its exciting. and beautiful. ...

so your name is earl? okay. first of all, welcome! I just recently joined, and i find this website amazing! They have a policy where you have to review before ...

wow, i really like this. Lil_Pau has a point that this is lyrics for a song, so it might go into lyrics. but, lyrics are only poetry that can comfertably ...