barefootrunner

I landed with an impressive flash of neon light in the middle of an atrociously bland and horribly recognizable snowscape. Twelve wolves stood in identical startled positions around me – ...

Thanks Leah! I'll check that out, but forgive me if I first write further on the story before coming back to it. I see what you mean with the rules ...

Thanks Anoia! By the way, are you a Terry Pratchett fan? I recognise the name as the Goddess of Things That Get Stuck in Drawers. Or am I missing a ...

Yes, its me, yet again. The wolf eyes the tattered cloak still held tight to her chest with her other hand. "eyed" would make that correct tense. I liked the ...

Ooh, scary! Love the ending. She felt for being so rude, but this was too important. She felt terrible, perhaps? I could find nothing else to pick at! Great story!

Hello! It's me again, being nitpicky. I just quoted the whole thing so that I could do the red marker thing that teachers seem to enjoy so much, but it ...

Hi Leah! Just noticed one spelling mistake: "mussle" is spelt "muzzle". Otherwise - great work! Love it. I like the fast pace and now I'm curious enough to read every ...

Okay - let's start. This story is absolutely grotesque, witty and I like it. A few grammar mistakes I'd like to point out: "Once upon a time, in a very ...

I just pasted the whole story here. I'll highlight the points that bother me a bit. Sorry in advance if I am a bit harsh and nitpicky - I hope ...

I slammed the door and ran down the path. The twilight cool swirled around my face, even though the long-gone heat of midday had melted the tar road, which was ...

Thanks for all the welcomes - they really help! I feel much more at home now. I've applied for a mentor to help along the learning process and I'm burning ...