barefootrunner

Great work! I'm starting with what would usually be my ending-line here because you changed the way I see the world :). Cool visuals, cold, even - lots of sparkles, ...

Ugh... Cool... It's so weird, so intriguing... What can I say... This is certainly a very special piece of work and it looks as though you have put some thought ...

“Esme!” I ignored the voice. “Esme! Talk to me!” Someone slapped my face. “Gerroff me,” I mumbled, trying to get back to sleep. “Esme,” I recognized Lucy’s voice. “Wake up ...

I landed in the middle of a city with a flash of neon light, which merged seamlessly with the backdrop of illuminated billboards. It was dark. Wind whipped my hair ...

I landed in the middle of a city with a flash of neon light, which merged seamlessly with the backdrop of illuminated billboards. It was dark. Wind whipped my hair ...

I think that Alfonso got most of those tenses, but you have a spelling mistake, "knarred", in the first paragraph, which should be "gnarled". I love this story! It is ...

Good! It was easy to follow, despite having no punctuation! The first stanza was great, but one or two things in the next stanza: But outside your head is not ...

Yo, mozzie, buzzin bout my bed, the name's Black - Jacob Black, an' if by midnight ye ain't dead, then I'm a bit o' dental plaque. Smack! Ye demmed thing, ...

I liked the poem's metaphorical base, the stanzas were good, but the first stanza bothered me. The word order was switched around. I'm sure you had your reasons for doing ...

This poem was cute! The first stanza made me muddled, it was a bit too much in my opinion. The rest was great, I liked the contrasts. I think the ...

Wow! These are good photos, but I think the focus on the near tip of the branch with the pigeon on it, is slightly off. The bottle is my favourite, ...

This one gets a like from me as a good, solid bit of free verse that keeps it real. I had no issues with the poem and am actually just ...

I liked the descriptions, but I agree with Rain -- the last lines break up the flow and the picture should be in a spoiler. The poem seemed a bit ...

A few preliminary tips on this one: 1) Don't preach, chat with us readers, get down to our level. 2) Keep it simple, short and sweet and uncluttered. 3) Focus ...

Pen it as light as a sandstorm, Write it as witty as a duck. If we're not laughing, We're probably barfing - Being morbid is trying your luck. Write a ...