barefootrunner

Barefootrunner skipped over to the unaffected people, still playing. "Isn't this great?" she said, between two flowing phrases. She considered taking the music up a notch, but then, what was ...

Barefootrunner stared at her empty hand in astonishment. "Come on, people - show a bit of spirit," she moaned. "That was just a very promising start to a bar brawl! ...

"Right!" snarled barefootrunner, flicking her apple-core off her knife and spiking another. "You're all insane! This is going too far! I just wanted a nice, quiet, healthy drink and now ...

Barefootrunner glances doubtfully at these strange people. "Who are you, anyway?" she grumbles, mollified by the man's commanding voice. "I'm barefootrunner. And this place is weird. It's messing with

Barefootrunner glances up in dismay as one of the strangers stands in apparent disgust and stalks off. "Look, there's no reason to be nasty," she snaps, losing her patience along ...

Somebody pushes barefootrunner violently from behind. Her mouthful of water fountains into the person next to her's lap. She whips around to see who has committed this heinous breach of ...

Barefootrunner shrinks into her seat as a strange man glares at her. She glances around. Everyone is engrossed in discussion. An apple whizzes past her ear. She absently catches it ...

Poetry. What is it? The answer is, especially with the invention of free verse, wrapped in controversy and dispute. The current definition is a vague "literary work in which special ...

Barefootrunner skips in, holding her broken shoes in one hand. She pulls a small roll of notes out of her dungarees and accidentally drops several coppers on the floor. Ten ...

We landed in a small room with bare walls and notably no windows. There was a sturdy door in one corner. “Why do I always end up getting captured?” I ...

This was good, pretty powerful writing, but I would be careful of TV series references, especially if you want to reach wider audiences. There was not enough visual input for ...

Good stuff! Previous critics got most of the grammar things, but just a warning: stick to the correct tense! Nearly all the mistakes that I saw were verb mistakes. You ...

I really liked this one. It is a huge improvement on the last story of yours that I reviewed, especially character-wise. I am really touched by the poor guy and ...

Nice story! I'll just pick on the grammar first. This may be overly harsh - if so, please excuse me! Most of these are either grammos, or just my own ...

Well well well! What have we here? A lilibonelle? You are amazing! Those repetative lines are an absolute horror to get quite right. Yours aren't perfect, but they're quite fine ...