bard_of_life

^is a complete and total nitpick, and cannot keep herself from breaking the rules to correct someone up the line from the person above her

^can't tell the difference between there and their

^randomly begins convesations on AIM with any and all members of YWS

[quote]If you want, I could go out and take a couple of pictures of 'orbs'. It's alrady been proven they are nothing but dust - but believers stick to the ...

Awwwwwwwww.... That made me cry..... Waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!

I know, I know.... Snibro! Orbins spelled backward is Snibro! I win, yay! Haha I am so weird!

Sureal - it's Haha! I hope you give 'em hell, perdone my french, haha! Sam - I'm Clint Sam, haha nice try trying to "fix" the board! my email is ...

Wow this was awesome a little confusing, but awesome all the same. After your paragraph break, it almost seemed as if you had switched into second person view. (Ask me ...

Maybe I'm better at fantasy rather than realistic fiction... I dunno. By the way, the poem thing he says is garbage, I'm working on somethin better right now :lol: :arrow: ...

Sam, do u mean realkids? If you do.... GO SAMMY GO SAMMY! WOOH WOOH GO SAMMY! *Falls over laughing* I'm going to announce my leave from Realkids. It's not worth ...

Yep. Never seen her but i kno her from another board

Ya mal the only reason I didn't describe her is she is going going gone by chapter three somethin big is gonna happen and his chances with her are going ...

This has real depth to it. I considered it very well written. I never noticed the change from past to present tense at all. Do you live in New York, ...

My best work comes out in realistic fiction/school stories, so crit hars I wanna make this one work! I'm workin on Chapter 2 right now! School Dances And Spaghetti Wars ...

[quote="areida07"]camwhore[/quote] I hope this means nothing dirty... I'm not sure it's not in my current vocab