ballerina13

Hello again! I like how this is developing. I have a question though, Did you change your MC's name? Because in the last chapther it was not Katarinna. Just wondering. ...

Hello! What you are writing about is a touchy subject for most people...a sad time in history. But! I enjoyed reading it very much. Your style is nice and I ...

Hello! This was so clever and fun to read. It really brought forth the message of how valuable our planet is. Although, it was very short. I feel that if ...

Hello! This was very good. It was so sad and heartfelt. The emotion was dead on and the descpritions made me feel as if I was there. The others have ...

Hello!This poem was so cute! I loved it. It has great flow and rhythm. I do not think that exclaimation point at the was unneccesary though. You might want to ...

Hi! This has such a strong message. I am sure every teenager can relate to this. There is so much emotion and depth to your poem. The flow was nice. ...

This was good. Short, concise, to the point. In one paragraph you explained such an event that shaped a new era in a way. It is factual. But I think ...

Hello! First, would like to mention to you that I really enjoyed this piece. As others have already noted, it is best to run spell-check before posting. There were just ...

I am aiming for 5-10.

I am aiming for 5-10.

Hello! This is very good. It so different from classic fairytales and Disney's interpretation. I really enjoyed the prologue. I do think that you could lengthen it a bit more ...

Hello! This was amazing! The flow and fluidity of the words was right on so good job on that. The description really paints a picture for me. As I read ...

This was amazing! I loved it. It is so sad though. Your piece had so much depth and emotion. There were a few parts were the flow was interrupted such ...

This was nice. I could see the scene perfectly. I loved the flow and word choice that you used. It was a calming and sweet poem. Great job! :D

I really enjoyed this. It had great flow and rhythm. It was inspiring and put a smile on my face! :D I loved how you used simple language and made ...