ballerina13

Hello! This is very sweet and cute. It has a Shel Silverstein tone to it. I do have one nitpick though. I feel that you could add some more detail ...

Hello! This was very well written. It was so cute and sweet. It seemed very old-fashioned. (Which is not a bad thing.) As other users have commented, it does have ...

DON’T CRY CHILD Don’t cry child, Don’t put up a wall. When you are feeling lonely, When they don’t answer your call. Don’t cry child, Don’t run away When they ...

Hello!This was interesting to read. It was nicely written. I loved the first paragraph. It explained so much and set the tone for the entire story. The useage of verbs ...

Hello! I must say that this poem was deep and the emotion came across very well. The descriptions were nice and explained the situation spot on. At times, the flow ...

Hello!This was very nice. I love the flow and the repetetive phrases. It had more impact for me that way. The pain and heartache comes across very well in this. ...

Hello! This was nicely written. I love the theme here. It is so sad but sweet at the same time. It is very relateable. I loved the first paragraph. It ...

Wow! These were very good. I love how simple yet powerful these shots are. The landscapes are beautiful. The black and white adds a nice, old fashioned touch to it. ...

Hello! I enjoyed reading this very much and the idea is so sweet and charming. I think that it would be better in stanza form, maybe. I like the ryhme ...

This is really well written. It is so cute and sad. It has a sense of nostalgia within it. There is much emotion in such a short poem. It is ...

Hello! I really like this. It has a lazy day, summertime feel to it. The imagery was wonderful. It was bright and bubbly, happy. I did not find any grammar ...

Hello! The concept of this is cute and sweet. But as other members have stated, there were a lot of spelling errors. Always remember to re-read and use spell check ...

I love the idea for this. It sweet and creative. The introduction was well-written. I loved how you said that he was your brother later on. Although, I feel that ...

Hello! This is nice. You depicted the dancer well and thoughtfully. I liked how you broke up the sentences. It made it easier to read.I feel that it lacked in ...

This is one of my first attempts at poetry. Since I have nothing else to say, here it goes: Dark clouds hover above my head They follow where ever I ...