ballerina13

Hello. Not to be mean but, the poem could be turned into stanza's. Also, the poem was beautiful. It had emotion in it that can connect to your readers, making ...

I love how the words flow, they are not choppy at all. I loved how you described everything also. I did not find manu errors. Following that, you describe the ...

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I very much enjoyed this piece. I thought that you gave superb detail and showed the characters emotions very well. It has potential.

This story sounds as if it could be god, it just needs more. Also, I think it would e good if you added some more detal, such as: what do ...

Hey! What do you like to write? Who are your favorite authors? Everyone is so nice and helpful here. Remember: for every one story you post, ou must write at ...

Hello! I am new too. But don't worry everyone is very nice and helpful. What genre do you write in? I write historical-fiction. Remember, you need to post at least ...

Hello! My name is Ballerina13. (Well, my screen name.) I absolutley love to write! I have written a few short stories on my own time. Anyway, my favorite authors are ...

Chapter 1 The Opera The lights dimmed in the Palace Garner Opera house, all the talking from the gentlemen and high class ladies, hushed.(How they were decked out in jewels, ...

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Hello! I loved your story. I thought it was excellent; I felt as if i was there on the boat to America. But, i think that the characters need more ...