ballerina13

Hey! So, what genre do you write in? Who are your favorite authors? We have a 2:1 rule here: for every one story you submit you need to write two ...

Hello! How are you? EVeryone on this site is wonderfull and always willing to help. If you have any questions just ask. What genre do you write in? From, Ballerina

Hello! We have rules here: for every story you submit you must write two or more reviews. So, what genre do you write in? Everyone is very nice and we ...

Genus! This will not be forgotten for awhile! How did you find out about this? Amazing. It can be insightful, silly and interesting at the same time. A wonderful poem.

I thought that this poem had a lot of depth and a intake of how people react to there decisions of how they are. It was very insightful. I enjoyed ...

Interesting concept. I love the way you described things and make them into metaphors and similes. This poem was very imaginative. It had great voice. My one suggestion is of ...

I thought that this was a well worded piece, showing how things do not really go as how you planned them, adn tht you have to live with it. It ...

I have tears in my eyes! Truly; they were springing up when I read it. It was heart wrenching in a beautiful and sad way. The poem showed true emotions ...

I love this poem. It had incredible depth and showed real emotion. It was very nice; it is true in some cases. You have a true talent. I am not ...

Simply marvelous! You put alot more detail into how the setting looked, making it seem making it as if you were really there, looking at the graden! Well done.

This was a very intruiging piece but, I think it would help if you described more. What does her home look like, what do the main charaters look like? Where ...

Hello! The story sounds interesting but, you might want to add some more detail about the earlier years of your character. The plot sounds very intriguing.

Hello! I thought that you did a great job on getting the details of what was happening, aslo describing the fear and what the bombing did to houses. There was ...

Chapter 2 “How goes it, Marie?”Genevieve asked walking into our room and sitting down on her bed the next morning. Then, she soon left to go practice dance so I ...

Excellent! The story sounds very intriging and unique. I like it! I did not find any major mistakes, you just might want to read through it and make sure it ...