ballerina13

I love this poem! Amazing! It really showed emotion and depth. But alas, it was heart wrenching. Still, a beautiful poem.

This was a very interesting piece. Also, very amusing! Good job.

This is a very well written piece. I very much enjoyed it! It really shows how true friends act and care for each other. Well done! *Gold Star*

This is an interesting piece and a lively concept. But, it is lacking in depth and emotion. None the less, it is very amusing but, to me there seems no ...

This is an interesting piece, but I do not really feel the part of the cafe. The poem shows depth and how people can turn on you in the strangest ...

This was an interesting poem, but it sort of left you hanging with a lot of questions.Who is this girl? Why is she in love with this guy? Put more ...

This is an interesting piece. The fluency is good along with the imagery. It felt as if I was there witnessing it all pan out. But, you need to describe ...

This plot sounds interesting but, it lacks detail and voice. There needs to be emotion in the words,too. Also, describe what things and people look like. It will fell more ...

This is a very interesting piece and it could lead to something but, it needs more detail and depth. Describe what the town looks like. What your characters look like. ...

Well, it looks like everyone had already told you about the rules that we have here. So, the next thing I can say is: How are you? What genre do ...

Greetings! What are you favorite books. What genre do you write in? Who do you admire as a writer. Everyone is very nice and willing to help at YWS. If ...

Hello and welcome. I see that everyone else has informed you of our rules. So, what genre do you write in? Who are your favorite authors? I am still new ...

Again, this was wonderful. There are so many ways a reader leave with from this poem and this type of poetry. It had a lot of depth and showed the ...

I thought that this poem had a lot of depth, telling about the pain one suffers when they put there heart on their sleeve. It was beautiful in a sad ...

This wonderful. It truly showed the strength it takes be in a sport. Great job.