ballerina13

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This was marvelous! The title of this piece drew me in. The description of it all was breathtaking. I do feel thought that you should described your main character more. ...

Jean-Robert was on my mind all day, every day. We would spend lazy days sitting at, Café Le E’toile, ice skating, having snow ball fights or just talking. Also, making ...

I loved this poem. It flowed except for the last line. I see that most people had gotten the 'nit-picks.' There is not much more I can say except for ...

Brilliant. Everything rhymed and your poem flowed very well. My favorite part was probably the part where he was deciding what to write. Great job.

I loved this piece! It showed so much emotion of the character and depth. It shows those feelings that we all get. It touches on just about every level. Excellent ...

This was interesting but, it does not really flow in my opinion. You could use more adjectives to help. Don't get me wring. I liked this piece alot. It just ...

I really liked this. I see that other people have already mentioned the errors. This piece was intriguing. I enjoyed the concept and thought that you had very good imagery. ...

This was a intriguing piece. I like the title. Your poem shows real emotion and longing. It pretty much hits on any level in a persons heart, which will draw ...

I really like this piece. There was so much truth and depth behind all of it! It really expresses emotion and who people feel at times. It drew me in ...

Bonjour mon amies! My name is Angelina. I am shy and not a big fan of talking about myself. But I will take a swing at it. I have been ...

Such a captivating piece this is! I have some advice for you though. Your dialogue is convincing. But, I feel that you could use a bit of imagery in your ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this piece, you gave such description that I could imagine the room. But, at times you cut the flow off by rhyming in some stanza's and ...

Wonderful piece. It had great imagry and depth. There were not many errors and it flowed pretty well. Again, it had great imagry. I could see it all happening.

Interesting piece but, it did not really seem to flow. It had great voice and showed the emotion of how people feel when there is a conflict. Excellent; it really ...