ballerina13

This was very good. You have talent. There is not much to edit, just make sure to read it out loud. Some parts sound a little off. This poem definitely ...

This was very good. I loved the last few lines. They showed such imagery. The entire poem was full of depth and emotion. The flow of it all could use ...

This piece was interesting. I loved your imagery and use of description. Flawless. I believe that this poem deserves a gold star! Great job. I hope you write more poems.

This was heart wrenching. Truly. But it was well written. It flowed pretty well. I have one word of advice. Emotion. The truth is that, while this was sad poem, ...

This piece was interesting and unique. It was quite funny also. The flow was good and you had good word choice to. Keep it up. I give you a gold ...

This was hilarious. A Lot of my friends are obsessed with Twilight series; it gets a little annoying. This deserves a gold star! Great job. I hope you continue this.

This was marvelous. It really gives a new perspective to the turmoil that we all face. The flow was remarkable as well. The stanza were different but, I suppose it ...

I play the flute as well. It is awesome! How do you become a veggie?

This style was interesting but, it gives more of a story feel. The plot was intriguing. But, you could use more descriptive words. Also, show more emotion. This was very ...

This piece was interesting but, the structure of it all bothered me. Try putting them into different stanza instead of just one word. There was good imagery. I could see ...

This story was interesting but, I feel that you need to establish your main character a bit more. Show us what she looks like, if she is shy or outgoing. ...

I loved this part. I like how you added more detail of the surroundings and people. Also, you established your main character well. I think you should describe the other ...

This was such a sweet little song, telling about the prime of life. Maybe? I don't know but, this wasa intersting take for a poem. It flowed well and was ...

This was heart wrenching. I loved. I was actually tearing up. It shows depth and emotion about the feelings of true love. Showing the hope and tranquility it can give ...

This was an interesting piece. The title is what drew me in. you pretty good flow until the last stanza. can see that most people got your errors. This piece ...