ballerina13

Hello! I can see that most people have to you of the rules. So, what types of books do you read? Do you have any favorite authors? Do not worry ...

Yes! But, for what? Oh well, I am excited for pretty much everything!

This was excellent. It showed real emotion and depth. It was heart wrenching in a beautiful way. You really opened up. I did not find many mistakes so, good job ...

Hi! Well, it seems to be that everyone has told you of the rules here. So, how are you? Who are your favorite authors? But just remember seeing that this ...

I loved this poem. It was sounded sad to me. There was depth and emotion in your piece that you captured beautifully. There were no major errors that I found. ...

This was an interesting take on a classical poem. You pulled it of very well. It was brilliantly written. It showed depth, emotion and was witty! Extraordinary imagery and word ...

This was interesting. The wording was good and it shows promise. Plus, it had great imagery. I could see it all. Good Job! Also, it sounded... old fashioned. Which is ...

This was extraordinary! It showed depth and emotion. I felt as if I was reading a poem by the great William Shakespeare. I did not find major errors but, the ...

This was good, but I found no emotion in the words. Your flow was good though. There was a lot of depth into the stanza's. My favorite one was probably ...

Your prologue sounds interesting, but it is so short. Still, it grabs hold of the reader. I loved the ending. My few suggestions are to describe things more, the room ...

10/10.

I loved these pictures. Especially the first one. I Loved the silhouette of it all. Excellent job.yth

Brown hair, brown eyes, short

But Yufi went to the bathroom anyway while he talked to cheese stick.

Banned because I am bored.