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Re: Heavensent
This was very short and did not seem to tell us anything about the story. Describe things, people, the room, the dog, why is he called Solace? Who is Jacob? ...
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: Conversation in a Hallway
Hello! And welcome to YWS. As Evi has already mentioned the mechanics of your piece, I will shy away from them. This was really good. It was sweet, funny and ...
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
This was good. I like that you created and a cliff hanger. It made me want to read more. I am interesting in where this story it going to go; ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Silent Song (My graphic novel) <<Updated>>
Wow! I love this. The sketches are so good. They are great. And the emotion put into the writing really draws me in. I hardly ever read graphic novels but, ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
Hello! World War 2! It is one the most interesting time periods for me. Plus I love historical fiction. It is my favorite genre. Anyway, I noticed that the viewer ...
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: Take A Walk With Me, Dad.
This was so sad. Heart-wrenching in fact. It was beautiful as well though. The emotion throughout the entire poem was spot on. The gradual increase of the climax was great. ...
Jan 21, 2011 -
Re: This word reminds me of... [2]
friendly
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: When A Princess Draws Arms
This was great. Truly it is amazing! I love the hair and the facial expression. The whole look of her is well-done. The message is great too; it is uplifting. ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: GUESS WHO...[1000 points to whoever guesses first right]
This was amazing. Seriously, it was a spot on representation of Taylor Swift. The strokes of the pencil and the shading are wonderul. Great job. My favorite parts are the ...
Jan 10, 2011 -
Re: What are you eating?
Oats and chocolate chips. Delectable!
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment? [2]
One in a million-Ne-Yo
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Skandar Keynes [pencil]
Wow! This is amazing. You have a real talent. I love the shadowing and the calmness of the pencil strokes. It looks very much like a photography. You got the ...
Jan 9, 2011 -
Re: Inspiration where'd you go? *Edited*
hello! This was good. It was sweet, cute, and funny. The idea of it all hits home with a lot of writers I am sure. Your flow was nice and ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: You died, tonight.
Hello! This was good. It was serious, heart-felt and emotion with a nice humorous touch at the end. It was very well written. Great job.
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: What are you listening to at the moment? [2]
Between Two Lungs- Florence and the Machine
Jan 8, 2011