ballerina13

Hello! First off, I just want to say how touching this poem was. It really was lovely. But I do feel that it could have used a bit more imagery ...

Hello! This was so funny and...random, but I loved it! Your rhyming was nice. It was just really short, but I know it was just for fun. Great job. Sorry ...

Hello! This poem was great. It was brilliantly written and it made me think as well. Truth be told, it was amazing, actually. :) The emotion in it and the ...

Hello! So far, I am loving this story line. It is great and the way you started off with dialogue hooked me right away. But some of the wording confused ...

Hello! This was a great poem. I loved it. It emoted the pre-wedding jitters that everyone faces so well. The way that you put dialogue in didn't distract from the ...

( This isn't finished yet. But I thought that I might as well get some feedback on this section. Hope you like it.) Melanie November 9th, 1934 The trumpets solo ...

Hello! Alright, so I think that this could be a nice section of the story when and if you expand on it. So, factually, I can't really give much of ...

Haha! This was great. It was so funny and written creatively. Great job.

Hello! Alrighty so, I think that the concept is a good idea- I've never read a book about 9/11 so this will be interesting. I think that this story could ...

Hello! I liked this poem. It was very sweet and simple but showed an insight about the character. I do have some corrections though. My critiques/ comments will be on ...

Hello! This poem was amazing. I loved the imagery that you put in it. The end line is great in a tragic sort of way, if you know what I ...

Hi! So this was a very short story and everything went at a very rapid pace. The plot is interesting and could have potential if it was expanded on. The ...

Hello! This was really good. I enjoyed it very much. The whole idea of it is intruiging. I liked the flow and tone set right away. The word choice and ...

Hello! This was interesting. The history of the Civil War is great. I love the Civil War era. But, I do feel that it was confusing. The poem-esque beginning was ...

Wow! This was great. There was such imagery and emotion within the words. It was so sweet and heart-breaking. I loved it. Your poem was something that I could see ...