baileymichelle

"She is dead in the living world and yet in the world of the dead she is very much alive." This is my favorite line of the entire three-part piece. ...

I'm going to have to go with Night Mistress. This one didn't have the emotional pull that the others did. The characters just seem kind of apathetic about everything, especially ...

I'm about to go read the other parts, but I wanted to leave you a quick note here. The characterization is done quite well - this is one of my ...

I think you have a lot of talent. It was definitely a thrilling and interesting read. My only complaints are that he switches back and forth too often, and is ...

I have to say, I loved it. Your character drew me in. The only parts that threw me off were: 1) Talking about his father "that was a fucking man." ...