bailecielo

i don't love this poem, but i want to advertise my passion for digital arts :] so... hope you like it?! :] * i don't know whether to post it ...

I like the profundity of the poem, and how you gave meaning to mundane things. Although i agree with ash, the manifestation of what these elements actually represent would help ...

oh snap! saw this too late! guess i'm too late! :[ oh well! i enjoyed reading them... :]

very opinionated, well-thought of but a little cliche... i think this would be far better as a blog rather than a poem... :] just needs some fixing up, and it ...

i think it needs a little work with the grammar and other technicalities.. :] add more rhythm to it! :] hope this helps... BIRD CAGE My heart is like a ...

Her woes whisper as silent as the wind, but howl loudly as old memories are awakened. They blow away all the leaves from the branches of happiness - from the ...

Wow BF! So this must be one of those love letters you told me about? You showed me a few, but i don't recall seeing this one. So Darcy-ish and ...

*revised version :] i tried to fix the rhythm... now it's a 6-5-6-5 syllable pattern :] checked the punctuation marks too! :] thanks for reviewing my work! :] hope this ...

FamousAuthor: I like how it revolves around giving more thought to such a mundane thing as an old leather binder, then later on denoting it as a source of memory. ...