bailecielo

*revised Silent Whispers Hanging on a cliff, trying not to fall. Waiting for an answer, is it you after all? Drowned in your words, caught in your trap. Could this ...

hi! it's lovely! although i agree that you have to resize the photo :D also, i recommend you enhance it a little... photoshop would work :D keep it up! :D

it's beautiful! :D i would have loved to be there when you took it! must have been a wonderful sight! :D although i suggest a little fixing up.. a little ...

very pretty! :D i just think you ought to change the title :D sounds too emo, think of something more striking! :D .. something like Drenched in Depression? :D i ...

i'm not a big cat fan, but this is so0o0o cute! :D very creative! i'm sure your whole class loved it?! i agree with the others, some of them look ...

i'm not a big cat fan, but this is so0o0o cute! :D very creative! i'm sure your whole class loved it?! i agree with the others, some of them look ...

this is cute! :] the saints ought to see this and save you a free seat! :D you're one dedicated fan alright! anyway, it's kind of too short for me ...

Hi everyone! :D i'm coco.. aka "bailecielo" :D it's one of my pen names... don't ask me what it means, because i totally forgot! :D Anyway, i've been using this ...

He's screaming his lungs out, saying "i love you!" I'm moping in the corner, wishing it was true. Why didn't i realize? he hasn't been the same. I'm growing tired, ...

short, but well written. maybe you can add more? i'd love to see more of it. :] anyway, i just have one problem: Forever guard You these true vows, which ...

Well, thanks! :D i had fun doing it! :] but, since i posted it as a poem, i guess it has to be reviewed first, right? So, if anyone saw ...

thanks bf! :] yaahh.. i followed the syllables... i kinda' liked the older one better, but this one's fine, i guess :] yap! im so0o0o excited! :] wow! lapit na ...

"Love is truly the black of cliches" (hey! that's a new one!)... True, the topic is overused but it's always beautiful. I really like your poem, and I'm particularly very ...

on second thought, forget my suggestion... :] it'll totally ruin the rest of it :] LOVE it! :]

wow! i just love it! especially this stanza: You walk so graceful, Guiltless. You smile so finely, Figuratively. You live so perfect, Peacefully, Placed. opinionated with a tinge of sarcasm... ...