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Thanks for the reviews guys! :D Honestly, I don't like this poem quite as much as the others but I thought it'd be quite amusing to voice out some sarcasm ...

Another nice one dear, you deserve this: *claps*! I love the imagery, that it almost amused me at first. I had no idea where it would lead to. The twist ...

*edited Sweetest of Me Yet I love you darling dear, I love you way too much. You’re like the bitter beer, I never want to touch. Just come near me ...

Love it bf! :D I'm trying out for the Heights. I'm making it a mission to print your works there! They're all so awesome! :D I love that it's now ...

Oh yah, follow-up comment. Better title, dear! :D And it was worth reading :D

Hi! I just wanted to thank you for the review (Heaving Ardor), but I looked through your portfolio (you're new, right? welcome to yws!!!) and saw this! :D It was ...

I read the review you made for a poem by a friend of mine. i thought her poem was awesome, although the comments you posted made a lot of sense. ...

Heaving Ardor So lost, confused, unknowingly feeling more than she thought she would. So weak, unnerved, heavily falling more than he thought he could. So close, endeared, mutually growing more ...

Didn't sound forced to me, dear! :D Love it! I like this so0o0o0o much: At least we've failed at nothing, For we've never tried; And so no perjured hope, Has ...

First of all, I credit you for writing a poem of substance! I love that it has a social impact and that it get's people to think. Anyway, every good ...

Hey Adna! :D That was beautiful! The first time I read it, I couldn't quite understand the significance of these lines: A kitten purr, a hyena cackle, An opera soprano’s ...

Thanks for all the reviews. I'm just a bit upset that people didn't quite understand the real message of the poem. It was supposed to have more depth than it ...

Wow! This is hard! I seriously have dozens of celeb crushes... maybe more than a hundred! :b Anyway, to name a few: *not really in order ACTORS 1. Josh Hartnett ...

Mirror as a Mirror Your left, his right; opposites seen alike. Mirror their image, generations' lineage- of hate, lies, and law it defies. Break the glass, replace the mass- with ...

Wow! Heavy political aggressiveness. Surely there are some things they get right!? :P We'll need every bit of ideology to make the world a better place! :D But then again, ...