bailecielo

Banned for banning someone giving out cookies! Who doesn't LOVE cookies?! Yum! :P

Structure-wise, not typical, so I like it. The concept was vague, but had a lot of emotion as well. Punctuation marks could help though; they'll make statements stand out more. ...

* something I'd probably want to hear from a man :P Playing Cliches I won’t promise you the moon, it’s not for me to give. Instead I’ll listen to your ...

Spectrum of Adulation Red. Raining. Render me weak. Real love is injustice or pleasure’s peak? Blue. Blistering. Bleeding in despair. Blessing in disguise or eternal scare? Green. Gripping. Grudge t

Overall, nice job! Your topic is quite unique. It's a good break from all the love poems, so I really appreciate this one. :) But of course, I have some ...

thanks guys! i fixed that up already. :D thanks for pointing it out! any other suggestion/comment would be helpful. :D

I’m drawn to no repulsion, No anger and no shame. For I can’t bare to hate you, Damned feelings still the same. I watch you holding hands, I surprise myself ...

I like the idea behind it. There's good concept but poor wording. You might want to express it in a more dramatic/expressive manner otherwise people won't give it much thought.

James! I'm speechless! that was BEAUTIFUL! :]

Aside from inconsistencies in rhyme (blank & ink), there's nothing more i can say about it. I just LOVE it! :] Keep Writing!

bf, i had watery eyes after i read this! it's just LOVELY! sorry, i know you really can't count my comments as 'reviews', but what else can i say? Perfectly ...

just BEAUTIFUL! :D sorry, i can't find anything to criticize... love yah bf! :D

This is a very pretty poem, although -- dare I say? -- I am beginning to be quite bored with the subject. Yes, yes, we know you love is leaving ...

Strained Smile It’s damp, cold and glum – just so ill at ease. I’ve waited for an hour, but was simply not appeased. Sickening, a guilt – let me faint, ...

A friend (KnightleyAngel) told me to read this one. Glad she did, cause i fell in LOVE with it! :P I keep reading it over and over again. This one ...