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I liked this.. It flowed really well :) It changed moods towards the end, but it worked.. [quote]Ecstatic, she leaps from the pyre of her maker Like right here, she's ...

This is so.. What's the word to use here? Maybe cute? Sure, I don't know. This is one of the sweetest, most well-written poems I've ever read, and it was ...

This is beautiful :) Normally, I'm not one for romatic poems, but the title caught my eye and I HAD to read it. I love this. This part was my ...

Hi there :) So, I really like this poem. You used good imagery, and I could definitely visualize the little girl trying to catch the butterfly.. Like, right her for ...

I was raking leaves today, and I thought this would make a great picture, so I ran into the house and grabbed my camera. :D

I really liked this... Although there were some cliche words like "blue eyes, frozen water, dark brown eyes, and melted chocolate," it is a very well written poem. Most people ...

I love this.. SO MUCH. This part's true with a lot of girls because lots of guys are stupid :) I hate your stupid friends. Every time I step into ...

GOOD LUCK! Hope you do well in med school. And this was very inspirational!

You used to tell me I was your baby, Your sunshine, Your one and only. I told you everything, All about my past. What has happened In my cruel, but short ...

I really liked this one.. To me, it was ALMOST remorseful? If that's the word I'm looking for. I don't know, but I liked it. The structure really stood out ...

I just wanna say, I really like this because of the color! And i like how the two on the sides are a little blurry, and then the one in ...

When I hear a country song, One thought comes in my head. Just one more twangy baritone, And I'll soon be dead! They like to sing 'bout heartbreak, And other ...

Hi, Angus! First off, I love how you divided the poem into three stanzas according to past, present, and future. It made the flow a lot better, and also easier ...

He was my best friend, Mom. Why'd you take him away? I used to talk to him For hours; days on end. We'd go places together, Play quirky mind games, ...

This really helps! Writing this probably took a while, but it is greatly appreciated. Thank you!