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FREEDOM'S PRICE Twice walked I, upon a land so beauteous, as tore my soul to contemplate a lesser place should even be, exist at all. A pride, thought I, not ...

7/10 quotes are alright, plus points for the drawing :)

bah rational is the way to go.

1 + 1 = 2 get in.

But it's not poetry! It's just a series of barely interconnected sentaces that have been said so many times before! It needs *something* about it to make it worth reading, ...

Dark chocolate, perhaps? What's the surname of that famous musician who died on July 4, 2003?

I have before my eyes the hilarious vision of woodchuckzilla trashing new york. I want a molecular biology degree.

Dude, you don't even know what that's about. Silly - it's about all the central fundementalist christians voting for Bush, while the coast is in all ways more sensible.

Why is this here?

Everything I have to say to this has been said on your other poem. Exactly the same things apply here.

No, I don't like it, for a lot of reasons. Firstly, and foremostly, it's angst: straight piece of advice to most new writers, DO NOT write about your broken relationship. ...

hockey

So if you're critiquing Unrelated Incidents by Tom Leonard, for example: thi reason a talk wia BBC accent iz coz yi widny wahnt mi ti talk aboot thi trooth wia ...

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American English - Idlewild