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Gah... you have such a dry tone. Why can't you be angsty and overdramatic like everyone else? Just for you, m'dear. ENDINGS Look out your world escapes, between the darkened ...

"After he drove the man out, he placed on the east side of the Garden of Eden cherubim and a flaming sword flashing back and forth to guard the way ...

Nah, evolves fits, though I'm thinking in a slightly more... um... physical way than you are, perhaps. I like this; in my mind, it reads in a slightly detatched, surreal ...

Think about it this way: if society affects who you are, how can you know everything there is to know about yourself? You're constantly being moulded by extrinsic pressures in ...

Woah! I'd say it works toward both those aims; nothing taught me how to structure better than debating and arguing, and sure as be-jumpin' Jesus, nothing was better at learnin' ...

6/10 - minus points for spelling 'burden' wrong. still funny, though.

That's basically saying that society doesn't affect who you are at all, and that's not right; how you live your life is affected massively by how you are brought up, ...

I am... wary. It strikes me that people who can't take a little bruising, shouldn't leave. They just shouldn't be debating. I do debating properly (ooh, posh) in school with ...

I thought I'd just share this gem from Weird Al Yankovic, just to keep in the mood. THE NIGHT SANTA WENT CRAZY Down in the workshop all the elves were ...

OK. Firstly, I like it; it's very rich (like Christmas pudding!) and full of images, but... it's riddled with... oddities. That's not a bad thing in itself, but grammatical correctness ...

I'm a wee bit dubious as to the placing of some of your line breaks. 'That things can die' doesn't seem to me to need a line of it's own; ...

This is a very... involved poem. The rhythm, and how it related to the content (especially the last few lines) are very important, and a bit hard to understand. I ...

I know exactly what I am. I am me. I am a human male with brown hair and blue eyes. That's true; but then again, how would you define 'human' ...

Well, thank you all. I see that Meta got it! Karl Marx it is indeed, mysteriously brought back to teach a class of high-schoolers. I'd hoped the third paragraph would ...

Absolutely cracking imagery; made me sad just reading it. I've got a couple of whines, though: -PUNCTUATION! Enjambemant is all well and good, but you've not used a *single* bit ...