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I mean the music I wrote for it. After all, it wouldn't sound quite right set to Sunshine, Lollipops and Rainbows would it? And thanks, Shriek :) Maybe when I'm ...

Most goodness. Now maybe I'll have some competition - I think we all know who's owning the Arcade right now.

This is true. So's Hallelujah , for example. Doesn't stop it being good ;) EDIT: and you think the lyrics are depressing, you should hear the music....

ABBEY ROAD Coming home along the Abbey Road Reading newspapers from moving cars Ten thousand holes stood weeping silently on the corners of your streets. Coming home along the Abbey ...

Right-o then. I succumbed to the challenge of trying to write a novel, for various reasons. Now, should I just keep adding chapters here, or make new threads? Just a ...

... then what is this for?

So, I'm not very impressed with this. A lot of the problem is your structure just isn't particularly poetical. All you have here is some sentances split up by line-breaks. ...

Nope, I don't like it - there's nothing to it. Firstly, it's all basic rhymes: it seems forced and ultimately child-like when you rhyme every line with obvious choices. Then, ...

Loved the title. Problem - you have no punctuation. Commas, semi-colons, full-stops... your poem is not complete without them. Before I'd consider this anywhere *near* acceptable, you need to get ...

Since we *have* a forum for spamming, effectively, I'm not really sure why we bothered with this. If YWS were an entirely writing-oriented site, and we were having trouble with ...

A thin strip of moonlight lighted the alley. The dumpsters were standing tall against the brick walls and the night wind. On the concrete between shredded newspapers and cans was ...

"A strange game. The only winning move is not to play."

I must say I'm very unhappy with this. For one thing, it has the possibility to increase the spam level - you're going to get people who need points to ...

First thing I thought of when I read the title was James Dean. Not your best, but interesting all the same. I like the descending *s.

The "Insufferable British snob" gets my vote any day.