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Yeah, Angel's got the gist of it; since I'm about to give you partly the same advice I gave her, it's quite fitting! :) It's quite touching, in a simple ...

BEAUTIFUL IMPERFECTIONS Speak to my soul in a blaze of flaws; a shining glory of twisted possibilities, tears and shattered glass - fissures in a skyscraper. Find me in a ...

... OK, now it's even more unrelated than before - at least the first version had some structure: this *is* just random words. First version was superior, but I think ...

To me, it just felt like a string of similar words... but I guess that's what poetry really is, right? No, it really, really isn't. I'm caught in two minds ...

I've got blood from every part of the UK, and Canada to boot, so I'm pretty much not bothered who comes out on top. We've got the Clan Crest above ...

2. “You understand what is happening to you, but you do not yet understand the ‘why’ of it. There are deeper things going on beneath the surface of the world ...

My only real comment is that "Don't love me 'cos I don't have a heart/to give you. " twigged the cliche-o-meter. Apart from that, a decent rant poem; very good.

Granted, but when you do you realise the gates are locked. I wish I had a fish.

Now, the easy way to rectify this situation: pointing out the obvious. 1. This is a writing website - that means that people post things they've written, and expect them ...

Eh? :( Bad choice of words, I now realise: the American Government supported Saddam.

Some would argue that Chirac is, indeed, a lunatic. You beat me to that one. Besides: the USA installed Saddam. They sure didn't install Chirac. Bin Laden, Saddam, Bush... ... ...

Granted, but she's going out with someone else, and you have to live in the same house.

Righty-o. Firstly, your use of rhyme was a breath of fresh air. There are *so* many people who butcher it (hey, I've certainly been guilty of it!) but your was ...

Argh. Damn frogs. Blow the world up, that always helps solve terrorism. Bah - Chirac's too senile to be making decisions about nuclear weapons.