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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I'm dating older from now on

    Yep, I'm loving this to pieces. Only criticism - you seem a little stray on the punctuation, sometimes - ends of verses don't have full-stops where they should, there are ...

    Mar 1, 2006
  • Lounge, The Re: Lenten Sacrifices

    Let's see if I can explain Lent a bit better; I'm not the most theologically minded person, so apologies if I get things wrong. First of all, it's important to ...

    Mar 1, 2006
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Cartoon Violence

    Firstly - your websites. Half of those are rubbish - we'll take this for example: Hagar conceives, making Sarai jealous. Abram tells Sarai to do to Hagar whatever she wants. ...

    Feb 28, 2006
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Creationism

    Then is God a scientific fact? There's a lot of evidence for Him, and practically none against.

    Feb 28, 2006
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Creationism

    "Then I saw a great white throne and him who was seated on it. Earth and sky fled from his presence, and there was no place for them. And I ...

    Feb 27, 2006
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Creationism

    Yes, and I'm differentiating between 'facts' and 'scientific facts'. A scientific fact (which I said evolution is) is not certain. It may be wrong. However, according to our current understanding ...

    Feb 27, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: On the Basis of Friendship

    Good, though I'm with Jack in general :) your old ones were more classically poetic. One thing - I think the rhythm in the first stanza could do with some ...

    Feb 27, 2006
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Creationism

    if most of the evidence points towards a theory, there is little/no contradicting evidence, if we do not possess a better way to explain what we are observing and we ...

    Feb 27, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Whispers in the Dark - Updated and Revised Edition

    You've not done horrendously with the hyphens, but you don't have a single colon, and only two semi-colons: for a prose piece of this size, that really needs some improvement.

    Feb 27, 2006
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Creationism

    Yeah, pretty much what I was saying about chance, except explained better. Now, on a side note... if you're a Christian, what's "never forgive" doing in your signiture? That's all.

    Feb 27, 2006
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Whispers in the Dark - Updated and Revised Edition

    OK, just one thing for now - every single sentance is a simple one. "This this this this this" or "this this this, this this this." It gets slow, it ...

    Feb 27, 2006
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Creationism

    You can show me that the ball goes downwards: "gravity," however, is just what you call the mechanism for making that happen. Now, I believe that God has put rules ...

    Feb 27, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: How Not To Make a Human

    This is what we back on the home forum call a remix: taking someone else's title or inspiration or opening line and turning it into something different. If you want ...

    Feb 27, 2006
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Creationism

    So, I believe that gravity is true. It may not be (we justn't haven't observed the flying ball in a scientific condition), but I believe it is. So, does this ...

    Feb 27, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Writers Challenge: Hot Dog

    I was going to write something for this challenge, but I just gave up even bothering to compete. Hot-rockin' craziness.

    Feb 27, 2006


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