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Re: I'm dating older from now on
Yep, I'm loving this to pieces. Only criticism - you seem a little stray on the punctuation, sometimes - ends of verses don't have full-stops where they should, there are ...
Mar 1, 2006 -
Re: Lenten Sacrifices
Let's see if I can explain Lent a bit better; I'm not the most theologically minded person, so apologies if I get things wrong. First of all, it's important to ...
Mar 1, 2006 -
Re: Cartoon Violence
Firstly - your websites. Half of those are rubbish - we'll take this for example: Hagar conceives, making Sarai jealous. Abram tells Sarai to do to Hagar whatever she wants. ...
Feb 28, 2006 -
Re: Creationism
Then is God a scientific fact? There's a lot of evidence for Him, and practically none against.
Feb 28, 2006 -
Re: Creationism
"Then I saw a great white throne and him who was seated on it. Earth and sky fled from his presence, and there was no place for them. And I ...
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: Creationism
Yes, and I'm differentiating between 'facts' and 'scientific facts'. A scientific fact (which I said evolution is) is not certain. It may be wrong. However, according to our current understanding ...
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: On the Basis of Friendship
Good, though I'm with Jack in general :) your old ones were more classically poetic. One thing - I think the rhythm in the first stanza could do with some ...
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: Creationism
if most of the evidence points towards a theory, there is little/no contradicting evidence, if we do not possess a better way to explain what we are observing and we ...
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: Whispers in the Dark - Updated and Revised Edition
You've not done horrendously with the hyphens, but you don't have a single colon, and only two semi-colons: for a prose piece of this size, that really needs some improvement.
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: Creationism
Yeah, pretty much what I was saying about chance, except explained better. Now, on a side note... if you're a Christian, what's "never forgive" doing in your signiture? That's all.
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: Whispers in the Dark - Updated and Revised Edition
OK, just one thing for now - every single sentance is a simple one. "This this this this this" or "this this this, this this this." It gets slow, it ...
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: Creationism
You can show me that the ball goes downwards: "gravity," however, is just what you call the mechanism for making that happen. Now, I believe that God has put rules ...
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: How Not To Make a Human
This is what we back on the home forum call a remix: taking someone else's title or inspiration or opening line and turning it into something different. If you want ...
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: Creationism
So, I believe that gravity is true. It may not be (we justn't haven't observed the flying ball in a scientific condition), but I believe it is. So, does this ...
Feb 27, 2006 -
Re: Writers Challenge: Hot Dog
I was going to write something for this challenge, but I just gave up even bothering to compete. Hot-rockin' craziness.
Feb 27, 2006
