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My head's spinning a little bit unhealthily at the moment, so I'll make this quick and come back to it: my first impression says very, very good poem (making pain/anger/etc ...

Well, there's a difference between happy days and happiest days of your life :) I think schooldays, for me at least, are certainly happy days: I've got a great set ...

Thanks for the encouragement, guys: something Incandescence said, about finding and dealing with your poetic voice kind of hit a nerve, a little while back - I guess this was ...

Ever read Happenstance by Carol Shields? You read from the start to the middle, which is the husband's story, and then you close the book, flip it over and read ...

Interesting, interesting. Firstly, the rhyme; you've not done too badly, I think - there are parts where it seems a little forced and like you've struggled to fit the poem ...

Reichieru, if you're being taught anything, part of that is learning what your limits are, and how you should best achieve higher and better skills. Before you do differentiation in ...

Interesting; short but sweet, as they say. It's a little hard to critique a piece that's got so little to write about, but that's alright :) all pieces have their ...

I didn't mean stop using rhymes until she's better at ryhming; I mean stop using them until she's better at poetry in general. Using rhyme effectively - *especially* in free ...

Showers would only get in the way of your praying if you always think "I want to talk to God now... but I'll have a shower instead, because that's what ...

In my experience, the people who say that kind of thing are usually the furthest from it. 5/10

Windmill is definitely my favourite out of the two: I didn't entirely get what it was about (well, I may have done, but I'm not sure...) but I loved how ...

Yeah, I'm just nice all over. Mwah. Ha. Ha. Ha. ... ANYway - hello!

... I'll excuse the fact that you haven't voted Walk the Line because you're all youngun's, musically speaking. AND YOU'RE ALL SINNERS.

I see plenty of Ender's Game fans around - I love you all. Lots and lots and lots. The last one is due out soon, isn't it... and the MOVIE. ...

You've got the structure of a SS very well; major kudos, you don't get a lot of strongly structured poetry around anymore. The only point you've slightly fallen off the ...